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The Vineyards of Greece

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Created for "The Greeks" Challenge at :iconmanipulatethis: as a Non-Competitive Entry. Yes, I know the dA watermark affects the quality of the picture, but I am sick and tired of people taking my art and doing whatever they want with it, copyright be damned.

Though there is no dA watermark, this piece may not be altered or posted on any other website by you any other person.


:bulletgreen:Model: :iconmizzd-stock:[link]

:bulletgreen:Child Model: :iconastrals-stock: [link]

:bulletgreen:Background::icondarkland-stock:[link]

:bulletgreen:Light Brushes: :iconredheadstock: [link] :iconkeepwaiting: [link]
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:star::star::star-half::star-empty::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star-empty::star-empty::star-empty: Impact

I wanted to write a little critique on composition.

The woman should be the most important person in the picture plane, but right now she is not. She's alone in a large environment, which makes the environment more important than she is.

She could be brought closer by placing her by the nearest column, and making her taller/bigger Then she'll becomes the most important thing in the image, and you may have space to add something else if you like.

You don't have to show that much of her body, either. This could become a "portrait" image by showing her from the waist up.

I do like the lighting, but it too is almost the most important thing in the image. Editing her would do this composition good.